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P6 Synthesis and Transformation Help Needed 10 years 1 month ago #1

  • Jian Rong
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Siti was surprised. She emerged as the overall champion for the competition.

Much to ____________________________________

George was very angry with Joshua. Joshua broke George's toy aeroplane when he tripped over.

_______________________________________ for ______________________________________________________
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Re: P6 Synthesis and Transformation Help Needed 10 years 1 month ago #2

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Much to her surprise,Siti emerged as the overall champion for the competition.


George was very angry with Joshua,who broke his toy aeroplane when he tripped over.
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Re: P6 Synthesis and Transformation Help Needed 10 years 1 month ago #3

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Siti was surprised. She emerged as the overall champion for the competition.

Much to ____________________________________


I think we need to keep her proper name in the sentence.

Much to Siti's surprise, she emerged as the overall champion for the competition.

George was very angry with Joshua. Joshua broke George's toy aeroplane when he tripped over.

_______________________________________ for ______________________________________________________

We need to use the word 'for' since it is given in the question.

George was very angry with Joshua for breaking George's toy aeroplane when he tripped over.
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Re: P6 Synthesis and Transformation Help Needed 10 years 1 month ago #4

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for the first sentence,the name Siti was used in the sentence.

for the second sentence,I overlooked the word'for',my apologies
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Re: P6 Synthesis and Transformation Help Needed 10 years 1 month ago #5

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Saraswathi wrote:
for the first sentence,the name Siti was used in the sentence.

Doesn't that mean:

to someone else's (audience) surprise, Siti emerged as the overall champion .............................
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Re: P6 Synthesis and Transformation Help Needed 10 years 1 month ago #6

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Jian Rong,
No.
The word 'her' is understood to refer to Siti
Instead of using,
Much to Siti's surprisr,Siti emerged as the overall champion
(which would become repetitive)
we use 'her'
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